the story and its world had more potential and the dragons felt underused and i wish they had a bigger presence in the story. plus, the characters needed deeper connections, but did i enjoy it? absolutely.
It sounded like the author just was about to have the entire attention on the main characters (Violet and Xaden) so if we ever wanna talk about the personality of another character like Liam we have only a sentence: He was brave and sharp.
Besides the spicy scenes, God!! Was she going to write a smut or what? Like I know it's love story and everything, but somehow it felt like over saying. Most of them, exactly most of them, were unnecessary and with removing them u wouldn't lose anything at all and that is implying they are kind of the weakness( which with removing them u still r on the stream of the story line).
So yeah, I totally can't agree more🤝🏻🤝🏻.
Judy
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